Amber, compare this to the comments you made about the three shoe adverts. you will see that you had much more to say about the choices that had been made by the advert designers - the emotions they make you feel and how meanings are created. You need to improve this to bring it up to merit or distinction grade.
Amber, compare this to the comments you made about the three shoe adverts. you will see that you had much more to say about the choices that had been made by the advert designers - the emotions they make you feel and how meanings are created. You need to improve this to bring it up to merit or distinction grade.
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